| THE GOLDEN THREAD
ONLINE
Issue #34
September 9, 2002
Welcome to
The Golden Thread Online, your free biweekly e-letter
from the American Writers & Artists Inc.. Every other week, you
will receive this special alert with secrets, tips, and insights from
AWAI's copywriting pros to help you improve your skills and reach your
goal of becoming a professional copywriter in the fastest time possible.

IN THIS ISSUE:
- What To Do When Your Client Asks for a Resume
- Tips for Writing Successful Fundraising Sales
Letters
- EXTRA! EXTRA! News and Job
Opportunities for AWAI Students

WHAT TO DO WHEN YOUR CLIENT ASKS
FOR A RESUME
When a potential copywriting client
asks you for your resume, simply put yourself in his shoes. Ask yourself
what he or she is looking for in a copywriter. Then, ask yourself what
makes you unique and how you can make yourself stand out.
If you have an impressive or extensive
background then sending a resume and cover letter along with samples of
your work is an excellent way to get your foot in the door. Use your copywriting
skills to hone into your employer's core complex -- feelings, beliefs,
desires. Tell him what you can do for him and why he should hire you over
anyone else and chances are -- he will.
If you lack experience or you don't
think your resume is strong enough to compete with the rest of the stack,
consider sending only a cover letter and samples. What your potential
employer really wants is someone who's going to bring in the money. If
he can find that someone without going through the stack of resumes on
his desk then he'll be happy. And when you beat his existing control in
the mail...he'll be even happier.
So how do you let him know that you're
that someone that deserves a chance if you don't have a resume?
Simple. You put your copywriting
skills to work and create the most effective cover letter imaginable.
You prove your worth (benefit) to your prospect and urge him to pick up
the phone to hire you for the project.
Here are a few tips from AWAI's Resume
Writing Program that you can use to help you produce a powerful cover
letter:
1. First, make a connection with
your prospect and grab his attention. Use his name in the greeting.
Tell him how you heard about the job and compliment him or his company.
For example …
"Dear James Smith:
"I very much enjoyed speaking
with you today about writing direct-mail packages for ABC Corporation.
I understand your company is a pioneer in the direct marketing industry."
2. Prove to him that you are the
best person for the job. Get as specific as possible, using concrete
examples and hard-hitting numbers.
For example …
"My writing skills and experience
make me a strong candidate for this assignment. I have:
* "increased Healthy Ways'
sales by 43%
* "authored 4 articles on
alternative health in XYZ magazine
* "boosted contributions for
Healthy Charity by 62%
* "conceptualized Wellness
Program for Work, Inc."
3. Finally, move him to take a
specific action -- call you for a meeting.
For example, say …
"At your convenience, I look
forward to speaking with you early next week. I am available for a meeting
Monday through Wednesday between 3:00 p.m. and 6:30 p.m."
If you don't have samples or a past
work history, you might want to consider submitting an assignment on spec.
Do your research and find a promo that the company is already mailing
and then rewrite it. Or ask them for an assignment that you will do for
them for FREE (as long as they agree to pay you for it if they like it
and mail it).
And don't forget to follow up. Persistence
pays. Don't stalk your client by any means -- but a nice follow up letter
or email restating the benefit of hiring you for their next assignment
is always a good push.
For more information on how to
create resumes for yourself or to learn how you can make some extra money
writing resumes for others visit: http://www.myresumebiz.com/
TIPS FOR WRITING SUCCESSFUL
FUNDRAISING SALES LETTERS
Mal Warwick & Assoc, Inc.
Here are some tips from Deborah Block
and Paul Karps (partners in BK Kreative and associates of fundraising
guru Mal Warwick) for gaining a competitive advantage in direct mail fundraising.
1. Write your copy from the donor's
point of view. Tell her what the organization is doing to better lives
-- including those of its supporters. Remember at all times that direct
mail fundraising is not about the charity … it's about the donor.
2. Emphasize how the organization
plays a premier role in a particular realm of the nonprofit universe.
If the organization is Number One or the best in something -- or does
work no one else does -- don't be afraid to say so. Identify it as "the
preeminent national (or regional/state/local) leader." Think that
may be stretching the truth a bit? Here's a subtle suggestion: Replace
"the" with "a."
3. Play up the charity's skill
and know-how. If, for example, the organization was founded 110 years
ago, clearly mention its long history of success. Explain that, over
the years, it's "done the job again and again." And now, it's
this experience and expertise that uniquely qualifies the organization
to solve the problem or to face the challenge ahead.
4. Emphasize the scope of the organization
-- as in "with field offices in 38 countries around the world,
we're in a unique position to …"
5. Take credit for the charity's
good work. If it is part of a coalition -- and if it's accurate to state
-- highlight its central role in the endeavor. It might be "leading
a broad coalition of like-minded groups." You can take a similar
tack by referring to coalition members as your "partners"
or "allies."
But, at all cost, try to avoid
specifically mentioning any other organization by name. All you're doing
is inviting the reader to give her money to that group -- and not yours.
6. To give your copy authenticity
and a genuine touch, get background information about the signer, including
a personal reference.
Source: Successful Fundraising
Online, August 2002. Visit: www.malwarwick.com/newsletter

CHECK OUT THIS EXCLUSIVE DEAL FOR
AWAI STUDENTS!
If you're familiar with Inside Direct
Mail's newsletter (and if you're not, you should be), you know that it's
a great resource for copywriters because it takes an inside look at what's
being mailed across the country and provides great insights into offers
… copy … design … and technique.
Normally, a one-year subscription
is priced at $195 -- and that's a fair price for everything that Inside
Direct Mail has to offer. But after much persuasion, they've agreed to
give AWAI students a greatly discounted price of $50. All you have to
do is e-mail pperkins@napco.com
with your shipping information or call (800) 777-8074 and mention this
code: AWAI/9999.

EXTRA! EXTRA! News and Job Opportunities
for AWAI Students
COPYWRITER WANTED -- Washington, DC -- The Brand Consultancy,
Inc., a rapidly growing, fast-paced marketing company, is in need of a
copywriter. Work must be compelling, different, and passionate. Primary
responsibilities include developing innovative and powerful concept and
copy. Computer skills in MAC a must. Interested students can e-mail resume,
salary history, and writing samples to vhann@thebrandconsultancy.com.
COPYWRITER WANTED -- Pleasanton, CA -- Safeway Inc.'s
Corporate Advertising Creative & Broadcast Media Services Department
has an opening for a copywriter. Responsibilities include developing copy
for all departments and company initiatives, developing original headline
and body copy for direct-marketing campaigns, and proofreading/editing
advertising materials throughout production. Qualified Candidates: 4-year
college degree; 3-5 years agency experience. Interested students can submit
their resumes at http://www.safeway.com/Employment_tmp/default.asp,
(Advertising, Copywriter #687-02).
TRAVEL WRITERS WANTED -- Caribbean Travel & Life
guides Caribbean travelers to new and interesting places to visit. Articles
cover behind-the-scenes stories, off-the-beaten-path destinations, and
ahead-of-the-curve knowledge about the Caribbean. Interested travel writers
can visit http://www.caribbeantravelmag.com/CTL_Main/1,3690,2-1-66-0-0-1,00.html
for submission and payment information.

COMING NEXT ISSUE:
- John Forde and Michael Masterson on How to
Write Better Copy by Being Honest
- Tips for Building Your Copywriting Portfolio

Ask Us
Quite frequently,
we get e-mails and calls from students asking questions or addressing
concerns about different aspects of copywriting. We'd like to start
including some of these questions and their answers in The Golden Thread
Online.
If you'd
like to submit a question, simply e-mail us at memberservices@awaionline.com with
"ASK THE MASTERS" in the subject line. Keep in mind that your
comments -- in whole or in part -- may appear in upcoming issues.

* ABOUT THE GOLDEN THREAD
ONLINE *
The Golden Thread Online is
a FREE biweekly newsletter from the American Writers & Artists Inc.
available to AWAI students and friends.
© 2002 American Writers & Artists Inc.
ARCHIVED ISSUES of The Golden Thread Online can be found on our website
at www.awaionline.com.
To ADVERTISE in The Golden Thread Online or send comments, news, research,
or story ideas, e-mail
Lori Appling at lappling@awaionline.com.
NOTE: If URLs do not appear as live links in your e-mail program, please
cut and paste the full URL into the location or address field of your
browser.
CHANGE OF ADDRESS? E-mail us at memberservices@awaionline.com with both your old
AND new information in the body of the message.
American Writers & Artists Inc.
245 NE 4th Ave., Ste 102
Delray Beach, FL 33483
Phone (561) 278-5557
Fax (561) 278-5929
memberservices@awaionline.com
|